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    Here i am going to put down some of my writing work. Some flippant, some serious. Some fifteen years old. If you're going to take the piss remember that none of it is about me. It's all just words n stuff.

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    A sin

    A sin for your black poetry
    I know your secrets hide
    I’ve read the book of soul you wrote
    Where you keep them all inside

    Just below the dark they lurk
    With mirrored black dead eyes
    Marauding in the depths of you
    Then break the black and rise

    A desire for your black poetry
    Those terrible thoughts you keep
    The horrid things you hide from you
    That manifest in sleep

    Face your darkest shadows
    Soak your soul in wrong
    Search your soul, it's gone
    What’s black is true
    The dark is you.

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    Peanut

    There’s a peanut in my poopie
    I am vexed to why it’s there
    No peanut I have eaten
    So I stand in thoughtful stare

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    FLAME GRUDGE PETAL PYJAMAS

    FLAME
    FIRE
    VIOLENT
    IGNITE

    GRUDGE
    SPIT
    SNARL
    FIGHT

    PETAL
    PASSION
    PEACH
    PYJAMAS

    TROPICAL
    COCONUT
    PALM
    BAHAMAS

    SPIRITUAL
    KNOWLEDGE
    LOVE
    BLEED

    PLANT
    DOUBT
    MIND
    SEED

    GRIP
    TALON
    CLAW
    TOOTH

    LONG
    GONE
    SPENT
    YOUTH

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    Ignorance

    Money is your God
    TV is the preacher
    The illusion is the fraud
    Ignorance is the teacher

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    My Neeed

    I need my need
    I knead my greed
    That’s what I need
    Only then can I be freed

    I need my perfect one
    I need to touch the sun
    I need to fuck everyone
    Russian roulette and I hold the gun

    Need like not human
    Need some sub dermal grooming
    Inbuilt pretempered desire
    Like my want set on fire

    I need to be gone from here
    I’ll need the same when I get there
    I need to lose myself
    In the arms of enormous wealth

    A wolfpacks need to rut and hunt
    Disciple of my unfree will
    Swallow till my belly’s full
    I am the last great must have fool

    I need anything
    I need everything
    I need things that I don’t need
    I am infected with greed

    Blind by the addiction to feed
    Please to feel my arms bleed
    Ever hungry to feed my greed
    I want you to bear my seed

    Eating your own self
    Look at your chewed soul
    I need to have it all
    I need to take a fall

    I need
    You need
    I need
    To understand
    I need
    That you
    I need
    Do not

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    Rocking Chair

    Will you still love me when I’m dithering and old?
    Will you hug me to warm me if cold?
    When I’m a drooling demented old fool
    Will you remember that once I was cool?
    Will we sit quietly on the bench in the park?
    Or will we be mischievous old fools out for a lark?
    Will we pretend that we’re deaf and can’t hear?
    Until someone offers a free round of beer
    When I’m decrepit please don’t ask me to dance
    Cause’ I won’t stand up cause’ I’ve peed my pants
    It’ll be great to just fall asleep
    Midway through talking and snooze for a week
    When I go out for a wander or roam
    I’ll put on my hat and leave my trousers at home
    I’ll have glasses about six inches deep
    And cause a sixteen car pile up as I cross the street
    When I’m senile and wrinkled and old
    And forgetful and smelly and cold
    And the skin on my feet is brown, green and blue
    I’ll remember the best days of my life were with you.

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    Supernatural






    : Super Natural

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    THE ABYSS OF NAMES AND KNOWING

    I stand at the edge
    And wait to fall in
    Lightning crackles around me
    And caresses at my skin

    I think to my first day
    The morning I was born
    Then look at this tired body
    And this older mind, so worn

    I think to all my may be fates
    And could haves that have passed
    I don't remember my first day
    But sure as hell my last

    And now standing at this crumbling edge
    The abyss of names and knowing
    My fear suddenly quickens pace
    As the crushing black keeps growing

    I stretch my arms out...

    ...Cruciform

    And fall

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    these are all your own original works?

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    Aye, i have about 180 pieces, short stories and prose stuff. Its not all great work though

    unfortunately.

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    i like the little short versus in post 6. reminds me of the stuff i use to read from Shel Silverstein.

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    I like "THE ABYSS OF NAMES AND KNOWING" specially the tone that the text have.
    I also write, short stories and tales. Poetry.......nada.
    But everything is in Spanish so I will not share anything.
    Leanna Decker Courtesy of CAI

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    Gargoyles

    Up high they sit, made of stone, made of grit.
    With wretched faces and sneering grins and pointed heads and pointed chins.
    Perched up high above the city and from no-one sighs a slight of pity.
    We made them horrid, we made them grotesque.
    We left them there to haunt our pests.
    On gothic towers and tall church steeples, we hide them high above the people.
    The Gargoyles that live up out of sight, that watch the city over our night.
    A thousand creatures built of stone, that call each city roof their throne.
    A thousand matchless beasts above that sit in silence.
    With beaks of granite and claws for violence.
    With arched wings that crest their spines, each Gargoyle sits, and bides it’s time.

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    Like brooding demons, wings curled, looming over the precipice, with claws dug in on nocturnal hunt, waiting for any creature to stir.

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    Wind batters their resting towers, so strongly built by human powers.
    And rain hammers down without sorrow, as tonight will be so long till the morrow.
    And then a flash, as light cuts through the night in a slash.
    And for a moment the air grows still, and then a rumble like grindstones mills.
    An ancient head turns and the gargoyle eyes flicker and burns
    Stone wings arch and catch the night, as the thousand strong army once again takes flight.

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    For once every hundred years since the first was carved they have perched in wait and starved, until a unique scar of the sky allows them to roam free, and hunt.

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    To them the city is once again new, it has been a century since they last hunted, and flew.
    A slow, silent swoop from high to deep, as they sing their dirge that sends the adults to sleep.
    And once the last heads drops to sleep, they stalk through homes with silent feet.
    Straight to the place where the infants rest, then clutch the child up to stone chest.
    Their retreat is silent and invisible but their crimes are all so unmissable.
    And with newborn child it returns to perch, this beast and countless others begin to feast.
    And so we gave them their curse, and forevermore then we must pay the purse.
    Our slaves of stone wait high above, for the next bolt of light, and the odd careless dove.

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    ANDROID BOY

    Android boy loved Digital Girl
    She made his ears go whirl

    ,,,,,,,,

    He had tin for skin
    And gauges for eyes
    They didn’t really match
    But were similar size

    He had tracks for feet
    And an antennae on his head
    A bulb in his chest
    Which shone bright red

    ,,,,,,,,

    To him Digital girl was perfect
    She wasn’t tin, but ceramic
    In a strange sort of hue
    Sort of purple with a kind of blue
    The first time he saw her
    His chest pump nearly blew

    He knew they were different
    She was all curves and he was all dents
    She was all panels and he was all vents
    Inside she had circuits, processors and a fan
    All he had was a valve, a gasket and an oil can
    She had all the upgrades
    To her they were a must
    He had a flaky paint job
    Proudly rimmed with rust

    ,,,,,,,,

    He gave her a digital rose
    She just stood there
    One eye raised
    With apathetic pose

    He wrote her a sonnet
    But the paper got oil on it
    He sent her a box of sweet nuts and bolts
    But it mysteriously “disappeared” in the post

    Android boy made a robot bear
    Out of shiny bobs and bits
    He gave it to her eagerly
    And dreamt of their first kiss

    She looked at the bear
    That he built with all his metal heart
    She clutched it in her hands
    And it promptly fell apart


    ,,,,,,,,

    Android boy was at a loss
    He had to make her opinion flip
    So he schemed a fiendish plan
    To change her memory chip

    The plan worked well
    Very well indeed
    He clicked her several functions
    Which ground down her speed

    Digital girl slowed down
    She looked in a doze
    She searched through her hard drive
    And suddenly she froze

    Now was his chance
    He opened her heart panel
    He reached deep inside
    He took out the golden chip
    Did not see the oil beneath his leaky foot
    Leaned forward and, slipped...

    ,,,,,,,,,

    Head first he fell
    Straight into digital girl he crashed
    Stuck, she fell backwards
    And promptly was smashed

    Android boy looked on in horror
    His tin shell frozen with fear
    His eye gauges dripped brake fluid
    For he had destroyed that which he loved so dear

    He panicked and tried to fix her
    But his skills were way below par
    In his quest for true love
    He had gone far too far

    His chest pump seized
    And then grew, shrunk and grew
    Another seize again
    And finally it blew

    ,,,,,,,,

    And so they lay there
    For a hundred more years
    Her covered in dust
    Him covered in tears

    Until one day a man passed by
    And saw the scrap bots’
    The scene perplexed him
    It drowned all his thoughts

    So he took their remains
    And tried to rebuild them
    It wasn’t quite perfect
    But at least they were moving

    But something was wrong
    They were alive but just staring
    Maybe he had missed a part
    Maybe a loose ballbearing

    The inventor realised what he had done
    He had put in her hard drive
    And her energy tank
    But swapped around the memory banks

    They were looking at each other
    Through the each others eyes
    Slowly it dawned on the reborn droids
    Slowly they realised
    It was not what you saw that mattered
    But that what layed inside

    The scientist swapped back their minds
    But their hearts were already changed
    She was more than her beauty
    He was slightly deranged

    But what she saw in him
    For all his mistakes
    Was a kind hearted droid
    Whose heart easily breaks

    Why did you break me
    She asked him at last
    I wanted to know you
    But I moved way too fast

    She looked at him and said
    Why didn’t you just ask me out
    So he plucked up the courage
    All that he could muster
    And asked Digital girl on a date
    Waiting for her to say “too late”
    She leaned a little closer
    And said to him “Ok”

    So they thank the inventor
    For all that he had done
    And turned towards the sunrise
    To have some robot fun

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